Recount Writing On Wednesday afternoon

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On Wednesday afternoon me and my papa drove to Whangarei so my papa could get his eyes checked. I thought I had to go with my papa so I asked my papa, “Am I coming with you?” He said, “No, you're going to your uncle's house. When I heard my papa say that I felt so excited. I was about to scream and I was as happy as a clown. When we got to Whangarei my papa dropped me off at my uncle's house. My cousins felt bored but when they saw me they were excited. They wanted to jump on the trampoline. I said, “We are going to jump in the pool after we play on the trampoline.” So first we played on the trampoline. I was jumping high in the sky. I felt so happy I was even giggling. Next we got into the pool but first we had to put on our togs. But I left my bag behind. My papa said he would get my bag but he lied. So I had to get into my cousin's shorts and I had to leave my t-shirt on. It was freezing when I got in the pool. I was about to jump out but I did not feel as cold as ice. Then my cousin said I had to go underwater. I did not want to go underwater. I did not know what my cousin was thinking. That was a crazy idea. But he still told me to do it. He did it, so I had to be brave. I did it but I was freezing cold. I liked going underwater. After that I wanted to get out so I did but then my cousins pulled me back into the pool. It was scary for me. I felt like I was going to drown. My cousins were laughing but I said what if you felt like you were about to drown. Then we all got out. It was cold because we stayed in the pool for about 15 Minutes. Our aunty gave us a towel each so we could get dry. After we got into some warm clothes we had some crackers. They were delicious. I felt as bright as the sun because I felt warm. My cousin Sidney said, “What can we play?” I said, “Let's play with the Scooters and the bikes. All my cousins said yes. Finally my papa came back and said, “Let's go home.” But then my cousins said, “Can we come too?” My papa said, “Of course you can.” I felt happy after our long day. I had a great time.