On Saturday

On Saturday
On Saturday morning me and my family went to Kerikeri
to get my mum and nana a phone at Vodafone my nana
didn't want me to get bored so she took me to the
2 dollar shop beside Vodafone we took a look in
the 2 dollar shop First my nana found a coat hanger for the
door Next I found some scranshe I wanted a scranshe
But my nana said no because my papa had the money
I felt a bit anger After that we walked out of the 2 dollar shop we walk up to Vodafone and my papa and my mum
were in Vodafone we were waiting for them they took a
 long time so we walk past them when we walked up my
nana found corn fries me and my nana were getting
hungry I thought my papa and mum were out but they
were still in there we headed to wait for a little bit I still said
I was hungry so we got my papa's keys and when we got there my papa and mum were out of Vodafone we were still hungry Then we went back to Kaikohe and got some McDonald's Finally we went back home and eat my own McDonald's.
We were learning about..Recount Writing.
I found it easy to...say where I went to who I went with.
I found it hard to...choose juicy worlds.
I really enjoyed...talking about my story.
Next time I need to…put as many  juicy words as I can.