I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing
This is the published copy of my writing
On Wednesday, my papa went to the hospital.
I felt unhappy but he did not want to go.
His kids were very worried.
They felt unhappy too.
So me and my nana went there every day
so we could see if they were looking after our papa.
I said to my nana, “Can we go to get a kai,
because I’m hungry.”
His kids were very worried.
They felt unhappy too.
So me and my nana went there every day
so we could see if they were looking after our papa.
I said to my nana, “Can we go to get a kai,
because I’m hungry.”
So we went to KFC and then we went home.
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